Looks fairly solid, actually. You might want to obscure the individual point costs, because GW frowns on sharing that sort of thing. I'm also assuming you're paying for a Musician on your Leadbelchers (you should, by the way) - otherwise that point total is a bit off. One thing I would suggest is that you could give a bit more love to your Maneaters - give them an Ogre pistol (it counts as an additional hand weapon in combat, and lets you shoot as well), and heavy armor. I'd trim a few of the points you've set aside for your Butcher for that. Another consideration you should make is fielding that Butcher as a level 2 Wizard - he can take care of himself pretty well at this points total thanks to the Bloodgruel lore attribute, you should thus look for more opportunities to cast spells.